Ålter Ego Posted January 25, 2006 Share Posted January 25, 2006 Two shy souls Who were made for another So alive and so free We were destined to be I saw you at a party Standing all alone So shy in your stance Too shy to dance Your arms wrapped around you All alone with your thoughts Looking so insecure So radiant and pure I have seen you before In my prayers and dreams And now I can't look away I just have so much to say About how I can tell That our spirits will click But will you even care Do I even dare Our eyes would lock Only to quickly pull apart Our eyes would meet again This time with shy grins Our darting glances Turn to awkward stares Now is my chance To ask you for this dance I can see in it your eyes That I am not alone That you feel the same That this is more than a game But along comes another With more confidence that me Now you two get involved As my hopes dissolve He makes you laugh And you forget about me Now you have your dance And I missed my chance He won't let you go Because he knows what he has If I only knew Then I would've danced with you I take one last look At your beautiful smile As I go my own way With still so much to say I feel cluttered with remorse As our ships passed by On this terrible night This unbearable night You are gone from my life But I will never forget But I will always regret That our souls never met... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shyanne Posted January 25, 2006 Share Posted January 25, 2006 very nice but sad poem..... if you wrote this about someone then i hope the end will change........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted January 25, 2006 Share Posted January 25, 2006 You reminded me of two individuals I know. Also of a wonderful poem posted awhile back. Both poems are wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted January 26, 2006 Share Posted January 26, 2006 I like this very very much. And SHY.. there was one very much like it........ was it a month or two ago????? why do I want to say it was about.... an office party???? both very nice poems.. btw... Love at first sight. But your wrong in one respect.. your souls did meet. When your eyes made contact... it was in the KNOWING. It was your mortal shells that never made contact. But your souls met.. and recognized each other.. Kindred spirits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 "The Shy One" by Romantic Sweetheart was the similar poem. No wonder I like them, the both mention "shy souls." Shadows - Love your way at looking at it. The souls connect, even if the bodies don't. And just for that instant, there was a bond that can't be severed. Kindred spirits, searching through the night for each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyoshiro Ogari Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 "The Shy One" by Romantic Sweetheart was the similar poem. No wonder I like them, the both mention "shy souls." Shadows - Love your way at looking at it. The souls connect, even if the bodies don't. And just for that instant, there was a bond that can't be severed. Kindred spirits, searching through the night for each other. Yeah, she's is indeed a talented sweetheart. She actually inspired me in a way. I was about a few lines in, then I remembered her poem and it gave me a visual from experiences that I had at parties. In fact, I told her it was the most heartfelt poem I ever read, being that I could relate like no other. Now if I could only change the ending... EDIT: Holy freakin * * * *! I can't believe what I just did!!! ](*,) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 Kyo, did you just give yourself away? Posted under the wrong name perhaps? Left the alter ego slip through? Lets see, from new york, place named after a fruit. The sense of humor, the beautiful and heartfelt writing.... do we have a winner? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyoshiro Ogari Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 I am such a dingleberry. I post the reply and see my Aeon Flux avatar instead of the Ålter one and fell out of my chair. So the cat is out of the bag I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 Whoo!!! Mystery solved! I sent a pm to Shadow's light like a week ago saying I suspected you, but I got busy so I couldn't confirm my suspicions by doing the search. But the sense of humor was the biggest tip off. And when you mentioned in a PM to me that you write, I connected that with Alters talent in writing poetry. Plus, another member on the board pointed out to me that Alter's avatar is of a women, and the only guys who use a women on their avatar is me and Kyo. Well, I think Kyo and Alter Ego are both good writers. And they should keep it up. And if you used your writing, you could impress girls all that much more. Though I have a question, I've seen Alter and Kyo on at the same time. How can that work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyoshiro Ogari Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 Two browsers, Internet Explorer & Safari. I did that purposely to keep suspicion away from me. And I might've gotten away with it, if it weren't for those meddling kids. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 And that dog too..... Wonder how many other alternative identies, alter egos are running around on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 Yes you did Shy!!! lol... I think somewhere along the line, I started trailing him...but, like you I had a horrible week and got busy. Nice KYO.... lol.. very very nice. Does that mean there are no scooby snacks now???? Glad that I've got you putting pen to paper. I haven't written anything in over 18 years. Fallen actually inspired me and got me out of my cave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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