neva_black_n_white Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 You stood there and watched - The guillotine glide I could see the horror - The haze in your eyes The row moved forward - The closer we got You grabbed out to reach me Your palms were hot What a strange moment - To show that you cared Instead you pulled me in front Continuing to glare I didn't know what was happening Before it had been done The row moved forward - We walked on You looked down on me Giving me a smirk Muttering with sarcasm Don't tell me "I don't put others first!" The end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 OHHH MY!!! Rubbing my neck as I read this... WOW!!! Aye... isn't it funny how we're always the sacrifical lambs for their ego's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted January 23, 2006 Author Share Posted January 23, 2006 Yeah, i guess we do act as the victim. Not that im saying men dont experience it. But its like to some degree were so easily fooled. I mean half the time women try to gain seek out for something theyve lost, then they try to be ignorant to it, but once their offered it, were sometimes stupid to fall for the bate. A sucker for love in this case! Neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
locolady Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 Thats really beautiful - did you write it? If so am very very impressed! If not, who did? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted January 23, 2006 Author Share Posted January 23, 2006 smiles. I writ it. Its about how i feel about my relationship at the minute. Its one of those feelings you have for a split second every now and again. He doesnt make me feel like it all the time. But i writ it. Very nice compliment, thanks neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
locolady Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 Wow - seriously, i love it. You have a real talent - keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted January 24, 2006 Author Share Posted January 24, 2006 chuckles. It really isnt that special, just how i was feeling. thanks though, neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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