venus777 Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 If my pores Closed shut As I live them to be Infinite layers Betray me The labyrinth of my mind, history blurred superimposed inside of waking moments Friction in the movement of time My truth dogmatic slips from me Grasping, I fool myself Grasping, I fool myself Grasping, I fool myself I follow blinding lights My ears ringing Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gunther Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Interesting, though I don't understand it. Indulge me, what does it mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venus777 Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 well, the first verse is about like, what if i was as tough as i behave, the second refers to the layers and complexity of the mind, goes on to talk about how the past is a part of the present, waking moments, because i'm always going through realizations, but they are always different realizations, none of them is in fact truth, because they are all wrong. it is not only my past that affects my present perspective, but also the past of humankind. and that past is not really clear either... my truth dogmatic is referring to the way that i tend to believe so strongly in my values, my ideas, but they are all based on my perspective which is so mixed up and based a lot on illusions, i fool myself, i think that i have the truth, but do i? how can i if other people have different truths than me? and i fool myself again and again and again. the last part is just like saying i'm following blinding lights but my ears are what is ringing, like my senses themselves are all messed up too, yeah its a weird poem, i guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 Deep. You have nice writing venus, very thoughtful. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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