lilbaby11 Posted December 26, 2005 Share Posted December 26, 2005 Just a girl smiling on the outside convincing everyone that everythings fine such a good liar she almost convinces herself until she looks in the mirror and remmbers why, why every day the tears are flowing remembering all the people that have hurt her she tries to look happy when on hte inside shes dying whishing everyone knew all the pain she went through and all the pain shes goin through on the inside ready to die but on the outside happy as can be! So whats a girl to do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted December 26, 2005 Share Posted December 26, 2005 Very nice I like it alot I feel you it's deep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Nice work. I feel what you are feeling. What's a guy do to? I think its to have faith and to concentrate on the good things in life, not to let the bad and the hurt overwhelm us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregnought Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Whats anyone to do? When people are going through a hard time like in that poem, just what can most people do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Whats anyone to do? When people are going through a hard time like in that poem, just what can most people do? Show support and try to understand the real person. Be understanding and caring. If you are, the person may feel better. What's the person to do? Try to see the good and hope for the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregnought Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Yep, thats about it. If your close, love them, hold them, do things for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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