neva_black_n_white Posted December 26, 2005 Share Posted December 26, 2005 Your words burn Like a fire untamed Your eyes seep out Years of my pain You make it sound easy Like nothings too much To you it isnt - You already gave up this love Your emotions are numb youve got **** all to gain Well guess what you *** head Youve won this game But dont you smile Not even a smirk For in the dark I shall lurk Ill get you back for all of these words Ill make you hear all ive heard Ill take this knife And thrust it through The piece of **** Labelled you ----------------------------sorry for the stars its something ive scribbled up in the last few seconds, someone hurt me pretty bad. I guess i'm not used to knowing how to deal with that. Not recently anyway.------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DN Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Anything we can do to help - other than offer support and sympathy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Nice poem. Sorry that you've been hurt. I'm always here if you want to talk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 I dont really do sympathy and everything *smiles*, I guess i dont know how to take it since I dont really look for it. To be honest poetry is enough for me. I dont really feel so "fussed" at the minute. I guess this is my outburst. Sorry about the language etc, not really me. Kell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 For some people writing can be the best therapy. It expresses our inner most thoughts and feelings. It lets us get out those outbursts. So if writing is help enough for you, then go with it. Just know that if you ever do want to talk, you have people willing to listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 Thanks ShySoul, im great at talking, but not usually about personal situations, thanks all the same though *smiles*. I guess poetry and riddles makes it easier for me. Often i know people wont fully understand what i write because its so broad but atleast i know its specific to me and that ive let it out in some form. But thanks, i see what you mean, im sure id perk up if there was a major issue. Your a special soul. kell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 Same here kell. Can't talk about personal things unless its with someone I really trust. So I often turn to writing and speak in a broad, general tone. Think more people can relate then, cause they will find someone to apply it to their life even if it wasn't in a way I intended and is totally different then my situation. That's the beautiful thing about poetry, can mean so many things to people. You're a special soul as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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