venus777 Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 Burning mystery You You who walks in and Walks right out You who does not talk But keeps it all sealed up tight You whose silence burns me To open you all up And I who walks in must Walk right out Self control was never one of my strong points I guess Ahhh, but your silence speaks but many words all in order like splashes of paint From far away perhaps one sees the picture well But when one is all up close it doesn't make any sense To me, But I never made much sense anyways I guess And you who walks in walks right out And I, I'm just left here to wonder why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 Nice poem Venus. Keep writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 I particularly liked: From far away perhaps one sees the picture well But when one is all up close it doesn’t make any sense I've never quite heard it like that before. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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