A Poem

[venus777]

Burning mystery

You

You who walks in and

Walks right out

You who does not talk

But keeps it all sealed up tight

You whose silence burns me

To open you all up

 

And I who walks in must

Walk right out

Self control was never one of my strong points I guess

 

Ahhh, but your silence speaks but many words

all in order like splashes of paint

From far away perhaps one sees the picture well

But when one is all up close it doesn't make any sense

To me,

But I never made much sense anyways I guess

 

And you who walks in walks right out

And I, I'm just left here to wonder why.

[ShySoul]

Nice poem Venus. Keep writing.

[darkblue]

I particularly liked:

From far away perhaps one sees the picture well

But when one is all up close it doesn’t make any sense

I've never quite heard it like that before.

 

Good job.