neva_black_n_white Posted December 15, 2005 Share Posted December 15, 2005 sometimes i hate you and sometimes i dont but sometimes i dislike you more than most maybe its how your hurt me the words that you say the way you lash out and then pretend its all "ok" you like to think your better than i could ever be maybe its because were so similar that you dont see that every time you lash out and every time you scream is every time i realise your as weak as me so you carry on pretending that everythings alright maybe im a little hurt but atleast i sleep at night you can keep on with the pain why not notch it up a level ill carry on laughing at your expense ill still be civil kell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted December 15, 2005 Share Posted December 15, 2005 WOW Kell I liked your poem. I have to say I hope your not in an abusive relationship. Anyway I loved it and I hope you keep writing! -Hub Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seekinghappYness Posted December 15, 2005 Share Posted December 15, 2005 nice poem~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue Posted December 16, 2005 Share Posted December 16, 2005 I could relate - probably because it is so broad that it could generally resemble many different situations. Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
registered Posted December 16, 2005 Share Posted December 16, 2005 Wow, this a great, yeah I agree with darkblue, part of it's beauty is the the fact that it could be related to many different types of situation, a few I've been in any way. top stuff neva_black_n_white Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 17, 2005 Share Posted December 17, 2005 Another good poem kell. I look forward to reading more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted December 17, 2005 Author Share Posted December 17, 2005 Thanks for the responces everyone. Hubman, im not in an abusive relationship, my boyfriend is one thing in life that i really couldnt fault. I guess i based it on such a wide spectrum so alot of people could relate. I have my scenario for this particular poem, and i guess you all have yours. Somethings need to be said whilst keeping it hidden at the same time. My way of indirectly speaking out. Thanks everyone, neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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