romantic sweetheart Posted December 10, 2005 Share Posted December 10, 2005 On the brink of sorrow No more tomorrows No more wine and song And getting along Just clashing noise "It's not a toy" Driving too fast Pain from the past A little boy crying And almost dying Grief turned to rage Clipped wings in a cage It's not the truth All this abuse Suffered together It didn't get better I'm sorry for pain No more me, just rain I'm sorry for tears And the hurtful years I wish it were softer Voices turned to laughter One day you will smile More than once in awhile No image, just light Just eyes burning bright A sweet human creature God in every feature You are beautiful, a pearl That is built in a swirl Of pain turning to joy Precious little boy Rest in the night "It will be all right…" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 10, 2005 Share Posted December 10, 2005 Great poem. Beautiful as usual. It's good to hear from you again romantic sweetheart. How are you doing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star6 Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Thats very good. Well done romantic sweetheart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted December 14, 2005 Share Posted December 14, 2005 Wow, definitely one of the most impressive poems i have read on this site. A couple lines need to be more less "out of the blue" (only 1 line I think. its in the first stanza), but I love the rhym/rhythm... both very consistent and pleasant to read. I choked up a bit. Made me think a lot Well written. -ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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