mattj Posted December 7, 2005 Share Posted December 7, 2005 hmm, wrote this when i was feeling depressed- not too great in my opinion, and as goes meaning i was just getting annoyed at myself for being depressed gennerally! thought i would post as i havent written many poems for a little while now I see darkness only, yet myself i scorn as darkess i know is nought but shade and shadow is none without light to fade to be void as from illusion i am torn myself would not forgive, as though i feel that i have lost and hope has gone that this is none and i'll go on yet into me does empty steal it is pathetic to look to dark for resemblance though it is a need of our soul for such the good without bad cannot be much and so we lie for our independance ---------------------------------- heres another poem i have written very recentley- its the first time ive allowed myself to write openley about love(?) and general teenage angst stuff! mainly about how i always end up friendly with people unlike me in the way they think though i guess your darkness i would hope to pale but if i can't do that i'd follow you down broken trail and never would look back i'd leave the happy place i know it could feel quite a sin but worth it so that i could show my thoughts would let you in your way can sometimes drag me down but i would go to set you free but if you could only have known others must see you for you to be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted December 7, 2005 Share Posted December 7, 2005 Nice work. Don't get upset with yourself for feeling sad, everyone goes through those periods. Teenage angst is... well, its teenage angst. It's a pain to go through, but you come out of it better for all the troubles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted December 8, 2005 Share Posted December 8, 2005 Those poems are just lovely... As Shy said, growing up can be a miserable time quite often - what with the clashes with parents, mixed emotions and feelings, and, well, rebellion!! And as he said, when you come out of it you are better off, you learn a lot from your experiences and experiments.. Things will improve, just work hard and you will reap the rewards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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