_hopeless_ Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 Poor beaten soul If it was ever there Is too weak to smile Too pained to care Poor crying heart Has no hope to beat Alone it will stay Cowered in defeat Mind can not grasp The possibility That it's life has come up short That it will no longer be Conscience shakes its head Trembles at the thought It has done no good After all the good it sought Body begins to crumble Blood begins to pour As it lays their dying On the kitchen floor Poor beaten soul Gets to leave the rest behind Open deaths new door And then see what it finds. ---------------------------- So what do you think? You likey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted November 30, 2005 Share Posted November 30, 2005 I like. Very good. The soul is resilent. Don't give up, have faith things will get better. Even in the darkest night there is a ray of hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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