neva_black_n_white Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 Sometimes.. somtimes a kiss on the hand is fairer than that on the lips sometimes a wish is greater than that of a gift but more than often we dont tend to see whats been given right infront of you and me the brightness of the sun the depth of the moon the colours of the rainbow the wind the gloom the oppotunity of sight the feeling of touch the rawness of emotions a heart thats been loved but more often than ever we tend to vision the darkness of the world the pain, peril, loneliness that we call livin' after all dont we create our own lifes? havin' control of the lows but more so the highs so dont sit and crumble saying the worlds a mistake the only thing youll gain is a heart full of hate get up and stand walk through the bad and live a life worth living be glad that you can see the brightness of the sun the depth of the mood the colours of the rainbow the wind the gloom the oppotunity of sight the feeling of touch the rawness of emotions a heart thats been loved ................................................................ I guess you can chose your own ending to this. Im one of those "live it up" folk.. theres only one shot after all! kell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 Great job. It's nice to see something optomistic and positive, instead of the usual sad poems that come up. You're right, we focus on the bad so much when we should focus on the good. Keep it up, your turning me into a fan of yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted November 20, 2005 Author Share Posted November 20, 2005 Thanks, that was my main aim, as you can see it doesnt flow very well (but that wasnt what i was trying to achieve) *smiles* And thats ok, fan clubs are alright by me, ive been called a groupie in my time anyway!! kell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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