I Post Posts Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 before you people read and think im crazy or something... I was inspired to write this after watching the movie American History X, and having a heated discussion with a very ignorant, racist person... anyways, let me know what you think. (I STAND FOR THE THEME AND MESSAGE IN THE POEM, NOT THE IDEAS THAT ARE BEING SAID) PERFECTION Sometimes, something seriously sings sick stories in my ear At first I couldn't catch its corrupt question kicking emotions of fear Kill, Kill in combat quickly with no care for the cost of those you hold dear… Wake-up wearily I can't help but wonder what just went on But the broken voice benevolently bosses at me with his song Kill the pregnant, and kill the young Kill the weak, and leave them hung Kill the old, with no remorse Kill the faults of mankind with brute force Quickly, quickly, if we are to be saved This will be your reward for how you have behaved To carry on your shoulders the baggage of the damned And get rid of what holds back the progress of man But as my mind listens and my emotions stir I come to the conclusion that this is not all that absurd Without weakness, power grows infinite There was weight on my shoulders before but this voice has lifted it Evolution can only be constrained by the weak spirited. And the quicker we do away with what is holding us back… The quicker we kick the pregnant and watch their heads crack… The quicker we can grow bold and spit in the face of the old The quicker the prominence of the strong can unfold And a perfect society in result we be created With no one of a different entity to be hated With no obese, and no anorexics With no ESE, and no dyslexics The community will live strong all in one hand ... Empty with everyone gone, and no one to stand Coming out of my moment of hopelessness I look around and find only myself shirtless Blood stained and in pain, I lay on the center of the surface From the sky the eyes of the weak and damned stare at me hurt-less The deed has been done. But when I try to stand I find it to be worthless And watch my self deteriorate because I myself was not perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregnought Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 ok.. im not exactly sure of the "message" behind it though, mind ot point it out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Post Posts Posted November 19, 2005 Author Share Posted November 19, 2005 No body is perfect. And ignorant people, like Neo-Nazis, the KKK, and people of organizations of the sort, who hold their outrageous beliefs that they are better than everyone else, and they are right, everyone else is wrong, they are teh "pure" race... hold these notions when in reality its not true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregnought Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 ok thanks. And i agree with that, however, it is hhuman nature to be better then everyone else, so that you get the dominent position, and the best mate. Fortuently, thats not true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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