HoldMeTightly Posted November 7, 2005 Share Posted November 7, 2005 First song I've posted in a long time. Here goes.... It's called: Love is suicide of the mind I said I'd never let you go When the moon hides the sun from us I'll hold you through every eclipse And I'll you love always... I am fake I am hate I was never really there at all Forget me I'm not real I'm not here Now Forgive me Forever was a lie Goodbye Trust no one As reality hits you hard Love is fake Love is hate Love was never ever there at all Forget me I'm not real I'm not here Now Forgive me Forever was a lie So let go Don't you know? Love is suicide of the mind Timeless romantic Hopeless love Dripping untruths Ripping my soul A lie A lie You're a fake You're pure hate You were never even there at all Forget me I'm not real I'm not here Now Forgive me Forever was a lie Goodbye The clock ticks And time ends As it drips of the pendulum One last time and now I'm gone And we're gone Because we were never really there at all Forget me I'm not real I'm not here I'm not love I'm not hate I'm not really there at all Time to let go and float Back Into reality Again So let go Don't you know? Love is suicide of the mind Suicide of the mind Love is suicide of the mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted November 7, 2005 Share Posted November 7, 2005 I likeds it, it must be a pretty song ...What's the rythme? I would like to have a better idea of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted November 7, 2005 Author Share Posted November 7, 2005 the rhythm of the song changes throughout. i dont have guitar chords down yet, but im a singer so i know how'd i'd sing it and i have the drum part down pretty much. i love comments on my writing so just let me know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropToZero Posted November 7, 2005 Share Posted November 7, 2005 Loving that song, I write stuff too...and I'm trying to take it from the form of just a 'poem' into guitar, but I'm not really good enough I guess. Maybe you could help me even with stuff I've written, sometimes I can write something and hear it in my mind how it would sound if played, just not knowledgable enough to actually write it out in chords on guitar. Other than my problems, I'm really liking that song, I always love music I can relate to, and that can easily relate to some thoughts that have been going thru my mind recently. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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