mysterious one Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 hi everyone ok i need some help here. this is a poem my friend wrote and apparently he thinks it's crap and i'm trying to convince him other wise. seeing as how i've been the only one who has read it i'd like to get some opinions on it ( i have permission fomr my friend to do this) so here it is In your eyes I see, The shine of a thousanoud stars And I know that your eyes Shine only for me The love I feel for you Knows no bounds It's stretches accross the seas And all the threads of time And I know that you will always Be there when I need you You will be my shoulder to cry on And my hope when I have none thanks for taking time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 Tell your friend that he's nuts if he thinks that sucks - I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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