GettingOverIt Posted October 25, 2005 Share Posted October 25, 2005 Well, it's been a while since I've posted lyrics or poems, and this one kinda sucks really, but it says what I need it to say... For what it's worth, eh.... "Falling" I know it's not much, But it's the best that I got... I'm trying so hard To stop loving you, But it is taking me longer Than I ever knew It would. Little by little, Each and every day, I am getting over you Though it's so hard to say Just how. We tried No Contact, Well, I did it first, Then we thought we'd be friends And bad went to worst. So, now you are doing the whole No contact thing. How long? I know what they say, "Man, it has been more than year!" But they don't understand All the pain and the fear I feel from not knowing You anymore. I try not to think of you, of your smile, of your face, But who am I fooling? Only everyone but me. I know I'm a disgrace. I've never been so pathetic before You came along. I want to hate you, But I can't. I tried, trust me. You don't care now, and that's what's so hard. What we had, even as friends Is so long gone. Everyone says I should move on And be happy. Be glad to be rid of you, But they just don't see. All the things I saw in you, What you never saw in me. Who cares? See, that is the joke, That I am stuck with these days. I care - about you, about us, But it doesn't matter anymore. So I am falling Out of love With you. Or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nenez Posted October 25, 2005 Share Posted October 25, 2005 This is lovely. Nenezxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msnak Posted October 25, 2005 Share Posted October 25, 2005 This is an absolute word picture of my heart right now! You've got talent. I can't articulate what I'm feeling like this, though I've written about 30 poems for one confusing guy, I write them rather vaguely. This is clear as crystal. Thanks for sharing. ") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GettingOverIt Posted October 26, 2005 Author Share Posted October 26, 2005 Thank you both for your replies! If I thought it would do any good, I'd send it to her.. (hollow laugh).... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 loved it i am in a some what similar situation, i really liked the poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven1607307306 Posted October 27, 2005 Share Posted October 27, 2005 I really like it man, I wish I could express myself like you. All my poetry is stupid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted October 27, 2005 Share Posted October 27, 2005 So I am falling Out of love With you. Or not. Favorite part. I haven't talked with you in a long, long time. I happened upon this post though and wanted you to know you can write me, still, any time. Things are still busy and stressful for me, and I'm sorry I take so long to get back to you. But I do love to hear from you and know how you are. I know the 'inside scoop' on all of this...and it pulled on my heart greatly. Keep strong, I have all the faith in the world in you. I'll always be here to listen whenever you need. Keep writing, I hope it helped some? take care, -fno Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GettingOverIt Posted October 28, 2005 Author Share Posted October 28, 2005 Steven, if the poetry comes from your heart, then it is never stupid. A lot of people try to get caught up in making it rhyme or giving it rhythm, but that is not always needed. Write from your heart, always, and it will never be stupid.... FNO, our recent break in communication is a two-way street... I am guilty of not writing you, too... I'll be sure to remedy that! Thanks for your thoughts!! I always like to see which part(s) of my writings grab you, as I know the 'inside scoop' on a lot of your writings... Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven1607307306 Posted November 1, 2005 Share Posted November 1, 2005 Yea, that's what I do, and my mother and girlfriend say that it is good, but I dont know why, I just think it sounds dumb... It just doesn't sound right. I mostly write free verse or somtimes short stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted November 10, 2005 Share Posted November 10, 2005 I really love this... there's so much emotion in it... you really have a way with words.... great writing! -Laura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted November 10, 2005 Share Posted November 10, 2005 I really love this... there's so much emotion in it... you really have a way with words.... great writing! -Laura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GettingOverIt Posted November 10, 2005 Author Share Posted November 10, 2005 Thank you, shorty20! I have to admit I am a little surprised by the reactions to this poem... When I wrote it, I thought it was absolute junk, but I put it all down anyway... I'm glad to know it has touched others.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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