brave Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Life in its madness, Killed my soul... The eternal hope within my heart, Gone, alive no more Bitter laughter hides the pain of broken dreams and shattered hopes of weakness and self pity The void, all welcoming feeding from my tears of sadness The light of life all but gone I live no more But my tears will exist for eternity For all to see, for all to know I gave up my faith for twisted passion A never ending nightmare Spiritually dead... A black void Cavorting with nothingness [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonjam Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 A beautifull poem for a tortured heart. I feel your pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimpcess Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 Good poems, peep mine, just about 3 down, let me know what ya think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brave Posted July 4, 2003 Author Share Posted July 4, 2003 that was great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted December 26, 2003 Share Posted December 26, 2003 i loved your poem brave very vivid, especially where you put that it fed on your tears. great piece. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cid Posted December 27, 2003 Share Posted December 27, 2003 I feel your pain and I loved your poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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