HoldMeTightly Posted October 2, 2005 Share Posted October 2, 2005 A smell like burning human on a cool Fall Night I've become everything I never wanted to be So I take another sip of your martini fate And break the glass now upon my skin As the shards tattoo my sinful bones Strike a match against the ground I smile as the fire consumes your face I laugh again as we're breaking apart By the thick black smoke that smells like Burning human flesh Smoldering human on a cool fall night Red and blue lights shine Missing the scene of the crime We're separated again And something inside of me doesn't really care I cared a sufficient amount before Now I only care enough to pour the gasoline onto Burning human flesh Smoldering human on a cool fall night Red and blue lights shine (lights shine) Missing the scene of the crime (you weren't there) X rated from the hateful words that were shared Yesterday as we sat crying on the leaves On the ground wet from our blood And tears that now fall onto your Burning human flesh Smoldering Human on a cool fall night Red and blue lights shine Missing the scene of the crime I turn to run away And only run into an incarnation of the past When we were together at last Maybe it was guilt that slapped me in the face But I still don't know To this day why I … ran… back to the scene of the crime There's chalky outline on the pavement Where you laid a minute ago…it was just a minute ago It was my fault that The neighbors smelled Burning human flesh Smoldering Human on a cool fall night Red and blue lights shone Missing the scene of the crime I am being cuffed from behind As my final tears fell Where your heart would be If you were still there. Red and blue lights shone Missing the scene of the crime Red and blue lights shone Missing the scene of the crime It was too late Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted October 3, 2005 Author Share Posted October 3, 2005 does anyone think anything about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted October 3, 2005 Author Share Posted October 3, 2005 guess not.... thanks anyway guys... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
petalbud Posted October 9, 2005 Share Posted October 9, 2005 actually,. i have something to say! think its a really cool poem,. but for some reason,. i think it would work better as a prose,.. (just a thought) really dark subject,. glad that you feel free to explore that side of your feelings. i write pretty dark stuff too usually about death and decay and burning, and blood . and stuff like that can i just ask,. what inspired you to write this? what does the burning signify??,.. for me, when i write about burning it usually signinfies a part of me that im burning off because I dont like it,.. sometimes in a weird way,.it could also mean purification and cleansing,.. heres a link to one of my poems along the same lines. link removed keep up the good work,. X petal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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