Borashi Posted September 29, 2005 Share Posted September 29, 2005 My heart is hollow at the core I really can't explain How I feel so ashamed There is nothing but endless pain From the exploits of your game My heart shattered on the floor Tears rolling down my cheeks As I began to weep Your image as fresh as the day I still can't believe I was played My heart beating against my chest Me wondering what to do next? Overcoming the pain From all those mind games My heart is at war with my brain My instincts never change I sensed it from the start I just didn't know about your cruel heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metallicachica247 Posted September 29, 2005 Share Posted September 29, 2005 i really like how you took one theme and went with it at the end of each stanza/verse keep it up \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted September 29, 2005 Share Posted September 29, 2005 Great job on your poem Borashi! I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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