bilal72401 Posted September 25, 2005 Share Posted September 25, 2005 I wrote this poem, while I was trying to relax, trying to get away from all the stress, and crazy things in life, I am not very good at naming poems, and I am not very good at writing poems either, I just wanted to share it with all of you, So please leave comments This place of mine, where the sun rises and lights up my day. Nothing can be compared, nothing can even come close. I can smell the steam on top of the mountain. Beautiful clear rivers flow, right down the rocky trails Beautiful gardens glow all over the mountain. Smells of the roses are all over the place. The gardens light up with the different colors of rainbows. As if they are from the heavens of above. Over the mountain is a never ending place, calm waters that go on for ever. Birds flying all over or sitting in the palm trees, making their noises calling each other names. While they make me relax with their beautiful singing, I slip away and keep listening to the songs. But the sun goes down and they go to sleep. So I watch the beautiful shining stars until the sun comes up. The moon makes a face every now and then, just to make me smile, because it knows I am in pain. I love my heaven, I will never let it go, I watch it every day to make me feel better. I wish you had it too, so you can see what it really is. It is paradise of love, that keeps your day going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 Remind me of an enchanted places you read in fairy tales, cool word usage!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 its almost like a fairy tale *big smiles* i do like happy endings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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