metallicachica247 Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 This isnt a peom but rather a song, and i hope you like it- The black of night sweeps over us and I dont know where to hide so I run inside but theres no light and I'm all alone her comes the fright Where to go from here isnt clear Locked in a closet hiding in fear Hating dark but loving night I'm all alone here comes the fright I close the door and prepare for the worst My wounds get deeper each time after the first and I'm not healing left her weeping and I'm all alone her comes the fright Where to go from here isnt clear locked in a closet hiding in fear hating dark but loving night I'm all alone here comes the fright This is another song I call Confusion: I was dizzy Something was in me It blocked my vision Altered my decisions It was a mystery That thing what it did to me Sometimes i get this feeling Everythings coming at me I fall to the ground and hit the celing could you help me Sometimes i get this feeling Everythings coming at me I fall to the ground and hit the celing Confusion took its toll I had no control as i wandered from my room through the halls i met my doom i was wondering what could happen this confusion i couldnt imagion everyone has there moments though some dont even know it It happens Sometimes i get this feeling Everythings coming at me I fall to the ground and hit the celing could you help me Sometimes i get this feeling Everythings coming at me I fall to the ground and hit the celing Okay, now this song i wrote with the editing of a friend: I look in the mirror but i dont know who im looking at I look at the water and i see my image staring back I wonder if ill be stuck living in a lie ON the beach i let the water clean this image from my eyes And this sand beneath our feet Draws us in when we r weak at the ocean were complete standing here and feeling free (x2) I am on a quest to figure out just who i am Trying to discover spread my wings see where ill land until i reach the ocean until i reach the sand i must wait to raise my voice and take a stand And this sand beneath our feet draws us in when we r weak at the ocean were complete standing here and feeling free (x2) (Am I living in reality) (will i keep my rationality) And this sand beneath our feet (Am i living in reality) Draws us in when we are weak (Will i keep my rationality) At the ocean were complete standing here and feeling free (am i living in reality will i keep my rationality) standing here and feeling free standing here and feeling free standing here and feeling free And this sand beneath our feet draws us in when we r weak at the ocean were complete standing here and feeling free (x2) I have a few hundred more so If you want i can show them to you do you have any suggestions, because i need all i can get for my band Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 This is my third time attempting to comment! My computer just doesn't want me to tell you how wonderful I found those lyrics. Do you write music as well... to accompany the lyrics? I could never do that, I just write lyrics, but I wish mine were as good as yours, or even close. You have some real talent there, don't let it go. My suggestion is to send those in and get them published somewhere or something. So many emotions surged through me as I read those words, and I hope others feel the same way too. Keep it up girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metallicachica247 Posted September 21, 2005 Author Share Posted September 21, 2005 i actually do write music as well, I play the electric bass, and i sing a little i am 13, so i can go to a band music camp called day jams, and learn to play better. Thank you so much for your comment. check your pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 wow thats amazing! dont let that talent go to waste girl!! let me know when you post some more of your stuff. PS. nothing in my PM mailbox or w/e its called. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metallicachica247 Posted September 21, 2005 Author Share Posted September 21, 2005 check again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 now check yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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