bilal72401 Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 my girl debra left me for her ex, i am not really sure why, but i was missing her one day and i wrote this poem its been 4 months since she left me, i am over her, but i still miss her. This Poem is called: Sadness is NOT bad The gardens glow, as the rivers flow I see your face shinning in the water When will it rise and kiss my lips? I saw you leave as you tore me apart I did not say a word, because i was in pain Now i see you smiling all in your world Your so happy, I dont even exist I dont know what i have done wrong I feel like dying leaves falling from the trees Seems like no one cares, no one exists Please tell me why you left So i can quit cutting all over my wrist Please tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metallicachica247 Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 thats pretty good actually... i write a lot of songs and not so many poems, but that is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted October 13, 2005 Author Share Posted October 13, 2005 thank you very much for your response Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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