HoldMeTightly Posted September 16, 2005 Share Posted September 16, 2005 First Poetic/Lyrical post on this forum. Please leave some constructive criticism so I can work on my writing. Thank you so much for your time! My Box of crayons/Imaginary World It hurts to hear your voice I remember every word you said Maybe I'm crazy But please get the f#$@ out of my head. So I take this box of crayons And like a little kid I color an imaginary world Where you and I once hid. You and I are holding hands Our fingers of wax entwined As we melt away in the sun Someday happiness I will find So I take this box of crayons And like a little kid I color an imaginary world Where you and once I hid. The tears will hit the paper Then the paper will get wet The world is unaffected But my blood would be a threat. So I take this box of crayons And like a little kid I color an imaginary world Where you and I once hid. We hid in our own world Where we could not be hurt It was fake, and we knew it Then you made me feel like dirt So I take this box of crayons And like a little kid I color my imaginary world Where you and I once hid. Now I sit here all alone Quietly on my bed And I color away my pain To get you out of my head Please leave me alone I just want to move on But the colors blend endlessly Where our love was once drawn So I take this box of crayons And like a little kid I color my imaginary world Where you and I once hid. Now I am alone And I thank God for it But I rip up this paper Because reality is $*** So I take this box of crayons And like a little kid I color the imaginary world Where you and I once hid. It was where you and I once hid. We once hid Once hid. Together We were together I hide alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted September 16, 2005 Share Posted September 16, 2005 i absolutely love the idea of that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted September 17, 2005 Author Share Posted September 17, 2005 uh. thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 wow great poem!!!!!!!!!!! Really awsome, keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted September 24, 2005 Author Share Posted September 24, 2005 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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