"Mr. Right"

[studygirl]

OK, I am on a bit of a poetry kick right now...this one's funny, enjoy! Feel free to respond

 

 

"MR. RIGHT"

 

Two vying for my affections – how lucky am I?

Choosing which one's for me is what I must try...

Let's weigh out the goods and the bads that I see

And hope I can pick out the right one for me.

Number 1 is real tall and he dresses real fly,

Talks smooth, looks hot, got moves that are right

He knows what to say to make all the girls melt,

Butterflies in my stomach, that's what I felt.

Number 2 is much shorter and a bit more hairy

Not so into clothes, but that's all right with me!

He always wants to be right by my side,

He never makes fun of my jacked up ride.

1 loves to go out and party with friends,

2 would rather stay in, doesn't care about new trends.

Sometimes 1 will take me to wine and to dine

But I must always question if I'm on his mind

With 2 I always stay home when I eat

But somehow it still feels like such a treat!

Both get real jealous of men talking to me

But 2's more protective – it's obvious as can be.

1 plays it cool, if he cares, I can't tell...

Sometimes his actions make me mad as hell!

2's always wearing his heart on his sleeve,

I can tell how he loves me, each time I leave.

When 1 gets mad at me, he'll yell and he'll scream

I don't ever know if we're really a team

It's very unusual for 2 to get upset,

When it occurs, the silent treatment I get

But all he needs is to go walk around

It takes very little to calm him down.

Sometimes when I'm home and 1 has gone out

I wonder all night what he's all about

He can be so sweet, but could it be fake?

He lied to me once, how much more should I take?

2 loves long walks with me on the beach or the park,

In the summer or winter, at noon or at dark

He's been there for me, he won't ever stray

He makes me feel better when I've had a bad day.

I talk to him about everything, he won't ever judge

Doesn't stay mad for long, can't hold a grudge.

Loves to cuddle on the couch and is there when I cry

Through good times and bad, I know his love just won't die.

I know my decision, can you see it too?

Hopefully you will also find one so devoted to you.

1 causes me grief, makes me melancholy –

So I'm trading him in for 2 – my sweet, loving PUPPY!!

[From_Now_On]

HA! Very good. You got me on that one. Perfect set-up. I loved it.

 

Keep writing.

[Moon Goddess]

I liked it very much and I hope that everyone could find their "Number 2" guy...It would make life much easier.