amour_13 Posted September 5, 2005 Share Posted September 5, 2005 I just found these three poems.. needed some input.. be honest. Yesterday I thought I was Done Yesterday I thought I was done; My feelings were contained, We were through for sure ANd I was okay with it. Today I see an image of you; Your name is spoken, My wall is broken to pieces It hurts to know youre not there. I want you here; To hold and kiss me, My comfort on hard days Youre my wings when I cant fly. Awaking from my dream; Youve gone and left me, My wings are broken I muse survive on my own. My broken wings will heal; And on day Ill be okay again. My Own I know youre trying to get through But the wall I built will not fall No matter what you say I believe whats in my heart. Ill never be good enough DONT tell me that I am Ill never be like other girls DONT tell me that I will You cannot change my heart Only God can do that You cannot change my mind Its a job for the divine. The way I see myself With time might be healed But donot rush the process The road is long and unclear. Listen to my words I appreciate the concern But these views are all my own Let me grow with them and learn. THE ANGER RAGES THE BLOOD MUST RUN I CANT TAKE THIS S**T IM TIRED OF THIS LIFE PLEASE JUST LET IT END! IM SO F***ED UP MY VISION'S BLURRED THE BODY CONVULSIONS MAKE ME TWIST AND TURN MY KNEES ARE SHAKING THOUGHTS ARE RACING MY HEARING'S DISTANT AND THE ANGER RAGES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stratguy620 Posted September 5, 2005 Share Posted September 5, 2005 Well, that last one had a quite different theme, but I still like them all anyways... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRock Posted September 5, 2005 Share Posted September 5, 2005 Hi, I think it is great that you are able to channel your emotions into a creative outlet like these poems, so nice job. They are quite dark and there is definitely a theme of isolation and despair. I think the second one was my favorite and I could really feel the emotion in the last one! I liked it. I hope the channeling of these emotions into poetry is a good release. Am I on the money? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amour_13 Posted September 6, 2005 Author Share Posted September 6, 2005 I guess so. I just write when it comes to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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