final minutes

[shorty20]

My emotions are running high

There's no where to turn

And everywhere I try to go

I get nothing but a burn

This burning is the fate

That I have come to earn

When I turned my back

My lessons I wouldn't learn

My eyes are growing heavy

My heart is beating slow

I'm sorry I won't ever get

To see how our love could grow

I couldn't take the pressures

Of the World that my life brought

But I'd be telling you a lie

If I said I hadn't fought

To stand my ground

And fight the costs

Of everything I'd given up

And everything I'd lost

I'm sorry I gave up

And couldn't fight the fight

I'm growing really weak

I see a big bright light

I'm sorry I gave up

On what we could have had

I couldn't take the pressures

Of everything gone bad

In my final minutes

I just want to say one thing

Never turn your back

On what your life may bring

Just face it and be strong

Always remember to smile

And you'll go very far

Or at least stand it for a while

[whatfor]

hi shorty

i like your poems alot.

I like this part

"Never turn your back

On what your life may bring

Just face it and be strong

Always remember to smile

And you'll go very far

Or at least stand it for a while"

I hope you are doing well?????? if you ever need a friend, pm me.

 

Keep writing

[lunatic]

damn girl you sound so awefully sad in this poem. I feel for you because I too am in pain just not as much as you are.

 

Please keep writing you poetry because I do enjoy reading it. Keep writing!

 

Please if you think your going to do something stupid or hurt yourself please talk to someone. Post here if thats your only outlet that you have.

 

PM me if you ever NEED to talk.