broken

[shorty20]

My heart lies broken

Bleeding on the floor

You didn't even care

You just slammed the door

Tears of anger

Shake my whole soul

These feeling I have

I can not control

I hate the way

I still can't hate you

You did me wrong

And said we were through

I gave you everything

I handed you my heart

And I trusted you

Right from the start

Now I'm left

Alone with my tears

Just thinking about

All of the years

All of the time

We spent as "we"

Baby, Please

Why can't you see?

That I belong

By your side

I was supposed

To be your bride

I'll have to move on

I'll have to be strong

But don't come back

When you realize you're wrong

Because I won't be here

Waiting to hear from you

Because I have cried my last tear

[whatdoyado]

wow did you right that? That was amazing. Good for a song too.

That was beautifully written. Why didn't you make the title "Last Tear"

[whatfor]

another great poem of yours.

im sorry you are in so much pain, i know how it feels.... we are all here for you.

hugs

[lunatic]

WoW Shorty20 another well written poem. I can totally relate to your pain from your words. As Whatfor stated we have all been thru it and you will pull thru.

 

I am sorry to see your in so much pain but, time does make things get better.

 

Keep writing you have a way with words!

[shorty20]

thanx for all of your replies guys... i'm glad you like what I write... and good idea about the title... i'll change it to that... and I'm looking into getting guitar lessons and learning to play so I can put my words to music... I've always wanted to do that... but thanx again for all your good words.. you guys are awesome... i'll prolly be posting some more here soon.