shorty20 Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 My heart lies broken Bleeding on the floor You didn't even care You just slammed the door Tears of anger Shake my whole soul These feeling I have I can not control I hate the way I still can't hate you You did me wrong And said we were through I gave you everything I handed you my heart And I trusted you Right from the start Now I'm left Alone with my tears Just thinking about All of the years All of the time We spent as "we" Baby, Please Why can't you see? That I belong By your side I was supposed To be your bride I'll have to move on I'll have to be strong But don't come back When you realize you're wrong Because I won't be here Waiting to hear from you Because I have cried my last tear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatdoyado Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 wow did you right that? That was amazing. Good for a song too. That was beautifully written. Why didn't you make the title "Last Tear" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatfor Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 another great poem of yours. im sorry you are in so much pain, i know how it feels.... we are all here for you. hugs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 WoW Shorty20 another well written poem. I can totally relate to your pain from your words. As Whatfor stated we have all been thru it and you will pull thru. I am sorry to see your in so much pain but, time does make things get better. Keep writing you have a way with words! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 thanx for all of your replies guys... i'm glad you like what I write... and good idea about the title... i'll change it to that... and I'm looking into getting guitar lessons and learning to play so I can put my words to music... I've always wanted to do that... but thanx again for all your good words.. you guys are awesome... i'll prolly be posting some more here soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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