shorty20 Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 I cry myself To sleep at night I pray to God He'll make everything right Tears roll down My sad, frowning eyes My pillow, my friend Muffles my cries When will i get better Get a new start? When will i get better 'Cuz I'm 'bout to fall apart But no one is there Nobody hears No one is there To dry my tears No one even knows I pretend all day long I pretend to be happy Tell myself to be strong I paint a smile on my face From the moment I'm awake But some day soon I'm going to break I'll run out of smiles Won't even try to be fake And I'll end this **** No matter what it takes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 No one even knows I pretend all day long I pretend to be happy Tell myself to be strong I paint a smile on my face From the moment I'm awake But some day soon I'm going to break I'll run out of smiles Won't even try to be fake WOW I applaud you on your poem it rocked!!!! I really like the verse that I quoted from your poem becuase thats exactly how I feel right now at this point in my life. Stay strong and keep writing your poems because I have been following your work and I do enjoy it. =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted August 30, 2005 Author Share Posted August 30, 2005 thanx alot... i really appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatfor Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 I like it alot. Thats how i feel pretty often, if not pretty always. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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