Xodus Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 The horror I feel inside, It's this feeling like I will die, I only know how to run and hide Nothing could feel this way not even a lonely bride. The way I can not breath, All I can think about is what if this feeling leaves I shake at the thought But most people say its something I sought No matter the way How can people deal with this same feeling everyday. I should run just because I can But all this love I feel for you has just began. ___________________________________________ You yell that I have done so much wrong But you don't know what, and you're the one that is gone You ask me to give you time I have even though you only laugh and sip on wine You offer me no relief You leave me yet you show now grief I'm supposed to wait for you But are you just trying to make me the fool I hide my pain behind my brown eyes Most people don't see that I feel like I could die I beg for forgiveness in these lines But in my heart is the only place my feelings are defined ______________________________________________ I know these are cheesy and both about way different feelings so any critics are welcomed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 Those are very creative poems there, both of them!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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