Shizzle Posted August 14, 2005 Share Posted August 14, 2005 hey guys.. could someone please, just like read and rate this.. it doesnt feel like one of my best, but i want it to be ok, before my sis see's it lol before you think anything dodgy.. i only met my little sister for the 1st time ever 3 weeks ago! she came over to the UK for a week, and went home yesterday! i just have a lot of thoughts and feelings at the moment. ----------------------------- There was a time... i was without You were never around, didn't have much doubt It wasn't your fault. We just went without Then i came over... Remember the 1st time i saw you face to face Just stood there looked into your eyes, There was something there...simple...yet no more lie's With a "hello sis. Do i get a hug?" From then on in, we could feel the love You are something special to me. We were meant to meet, it had to be I know you live far Am always going to love you with all of my heart I have only knew you for 13 days out 12 years I think that's why i shed so many tears You are more than i could have ever wished for I know am lucky, i can't wait to see you more Just wanted you to know xx That poem was for you... my little sister Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aueft Posted August 14, 2005 Share Posted August 14, 2005 I like it a lot. I think it's a genuine display of your emotions. Good job man, it doesn't matter how good it is, really. My guess is that no matter what, it's going to mean a lot to her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
good_kisser_gal Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 thats a very nice poem...if i am ur sister i would really loved that and would really gave me tears... i love the part w/c is: I have only knew you for 13 days out 12 years I think that's why i shed so many tears its just really very touching and very emotional.... nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizzle Posted August 17, 2005 Author Share Posted August 17, 2005 Thanks You two, she loved and yep she cried lol! got her a domain name for it too! link removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lexy Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 I really liked your poam. I am glad your sister liked it. Good Job!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
good_kisser_gal Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 hey! am really glad that she liked the poem that u made especially for her...ur so sweet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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