dpressedone89 Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 uhm i guess i should let you know that this poem had freaked out everyone whos read it so far, i would like some oppinions plaese your cold embrace in the night so welcome not a matter of sex but of pure love and admiration to hold on to what i love so dear a kiss right on my neck, your hands in mine my first,last, and only love you were taken tonight you return to share on last romance your pale skin glowing against the background of a foggy moonlit night My head on your shoulder crying that ive missed you so your hands around my neck you tell me "im yours, forever i will love you" and in that moment i think of nothing my mind blank, oddly lucid, i think now only of you I see you violet eyes and white night as tragically beautiful as it was the night i found you you kiss my neck, close to my collar and my eyes close silent ecstasy take my mind to a place free of all torments you take my hand as i take yours, both already open;dripping the fuel of life dripping from both our wrists you hold mine up to the sky, leaning torward it she leans her mouth torward my wrist i take her wrist just as close I whisper, "i will always love you my dear", she grins as a tear escapes she whispers back" I am your always my love" and i begin to cry as we share eachothers blood,each others love, each others life I will be with you on the other side -stitches Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkshadow Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 There is nothing freakish about this piece. It is an escape to view and feel alive in thought. The sharing of blood, it reminds me of some of my most precious moments, more than intimacy it is a last heartbeat faced with eternity. Wonderful, the thoughts it brings. -Tony Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted August 3, 2005 Share Posted August 3, 2005 Very good. It struck me a visual quite easily. Beautiful. Tragically beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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