a love poem

[dpressedone89]

uhm i guess i should let you know that this poem had freaked out everyone whos read it so far, i would like some oppinions plaese

 

your cold embrace in the night so welcome

not a matter of sex but of pure love and admiration

to hold on to what i love so dear

a kiss right on my neck, your hands in mine

my first,last, and only love you were taken

tonight you return to share on last romance

your pale skin glowing against the background of a foggy moonlit night

My head on your shoulder crying that ive missed you so

your hands around my neck you tell me "im yours, forever i will love you"

and in that moment i think of nothing

my mind blank, oddly lucid, i think now only of you

I see you violet eyes and white night

as tragically beautiful as it was the night i found you

you kiss my neck, close to my collar and my eyes close

silent ecstasy take my mind to a place free of all torments

you take my hand as i take yours, both already open;dripping

the fuel of life dripping from both our wrists

you hold mine up to the sky, leaning torward it

she leans her mouth torward my wrist

i take her wrist just as close

I whisper, "i will always love you my dear", she grins as a tear escapes

she whispers back" I am your always my love" and i begin to cry

as we share eachothers blood,each others love, each others life

I will be with you on the other side

-stitches

[Darkshadow]

There is nothing freakish about this piece. It is an escape to view and feel alive in thought. The sharing of blood, it reminds me of some of my most precious moments, more than intimacy it is a last heartbeat faced with eternity. Wonderful, the thoughts it brings.

-Tony

[From_Now_On]

Very good. It struck me a visual quite easily. Beautiful. Tragically beautiful.