shorty20 Posted August 2, 2005 Share Posted August 2, 2005 There's nothing I wouldn't give To be closer to you We're so far away But I can still feel you To kiss you, to hug you Just to hold your hand Would be heaven to me This distance I can't stand Soon we'll be together I'll feel your touch once more But I won't take it for granted I'll cherish and adore Every touch, Every kiss The internal bliss Baby, I can't wait for this ... bein bored at work, missing my boy... can't wait till we can be closer together... let me know what you guys think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue Posted August 2, 2005 Share Posted August 2, 2005 Thoughtful and emotional. is it and LDR? Many people will be able to relate to it. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 2, 2005 Share Posted August 2, 2005 I thought it was a very nicely laid out poem. Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted August 2, 2005 Author Share Posted August 2, 2005 thanx guys... yes, we live like 3 hrs apart, but I'll be moving closer to him soon i hope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue Posted August 2, 2005 Share Posted August 2, 2005 All the best! I hope it works out. The poem reflects your feelings for him. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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