sorryJason Posted August 1, 2005 Share Posted August 1, 2005 Hey hubman, this another one of those not so good ones, what do you think? In the arms of love I slept one night in the arms of love and dreamt of a better world she wrapped me in her arms live an angels wings unfurled I spent one morning in the arms of love and thought about a better future she took away the pain and hurt and show me her heart so pure I spent one afternoon in the arms of love and saw a world so new and good where we could live and love and learn where everyone could be understood I live my life in the arms of love and now it the arms are gone but the love is still there and it was always live on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted August 2, 2005 Share Posted August 2, 2005 lol Jay your a trip. They poem is pretty good and I enjoyed it. If your not happy with the layout of your poem try re-wording it to make the flow batter. I think you do pretty good expressing yourself in your writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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