Another not so good one

[sorryJason]

Hey hubman, this another one of those not so good ones, what do you think?

 

In the arms of love

 

I slept one night in the arms of love

and dreamt of a better world

she wrapped me in her arms

live an angels wings unfurled

 

I spent one morning in the arms of love

and thought about a better future

she took away the pain and hurt

and show me her heart so pure

 

I spent one afternoon in the arms of love

and saw a world so new and good

where we could live and love and learn

where everyone could be understood

 

I live my life in the arms of love

and now it the arms are gone

but the love is still there

and it was always live on

[lunatic]

lol Jay your a trip. They poem is pretty good and I enjoyed it. If your not happy with the layout of your poem try re-wording it to make the flow batter. I think you do pretty good expressing yourself in your writing.