sorryJason Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Hey Hubman, is this ending a little better? It feels good to do this, eh? Kind of like writing letters to my ex that I will never send, do you do that too? To The One I hurt you are so beautiful, you are so kind so why did I have to go out of my mind and hurt you so bad that it left a bruise why did I chose not to love, but to abuse the only one I ever loved in my life the only woman I wanted for a wife I hurt your soul, I hurt your mind I am so sorry, that I was so unkind that I took your love and gave you none I really thought that you were the one who was my other half on this earth the who was meant for me from birth But I made mistakes, I ruined it all I made you feel weak, stupid and small I wish I could take back all I have done and give you the sky, the stars, the sun but alas I cannot, I am stuck with my sin and we will never see what could have been. Jay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tigris Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 That's brilliant! I wish I could do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 BRAVO!!! **Standing Ovation** That is a great revision to your poem Jay! Keep up the good work and keep posting them. To me my poetry is a combination of my feelings and thoughts. Sometimes I have a hard time expressing my feelings and poetry helps me vent. I dont know if she is looking at my poetry or not. They are for me more than for anyone else including her. If your poems are helping you cope with your loss then you MUST keep writing and yes it can be alot of fun. Oh and to answer your question about writing letters to me ex that I will never send yeah they are very much that too. Keep writing you have a talent and I enjoy your style of writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
good_kisser_gal Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 that was great! i even remember, when i accidentally read the poem that my ex bf made for me when we are still together and had a problem back then that lead to breaking up(but only read it after a year ago)...and if i could read that at that time perhaps we nver have to broke up and still be on each others arms...he was too scared to let me see his work and know his true feelings...just like u.... i just cant really understand u "guys" that even u see us "girls" beautiful, kind and loving...why is it u still hurt us??? whats really the logic behind this???can anyone just comment on this?...that would help me in a way... am really feeling very sorry.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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