Gunther Posted July 26, 2005 Share Posted July 26, 2005 A little more goth than I usualy do, just looking for some opinions, if you like it post, if you hate it say so. apocalyptic visions in the dawn of a day I keep my sword close as lie in wait Horsemen drag the souls of the living but leave me in there wake I must have been sucsessfull my soul they could not take I fought with the angels of god a stayed them at there gate. now the dead walk the earth, I keep my sword close as I lie in wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 i really enjoyed it. keep writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 i like it, it kinda tells a story and its very visual i think its very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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