dpressedone89 Posted July 24, 2005 Share Posted July 24, 2005 here are a bunch of haiku's i wrote. fire consumes me the light comes from a darkness stand back watch me burn the living die young the dead live until the end run away from life please hurt me my queen your love brings a painful joy i will die for you leave the nest, be free live your life outside the safety fall with broken wings speak to me my angel fly away to the holy one im left in the ashes her eyes burned so bright she was my beautiful love our flame extinguished a knife deep in me a savior inside of me i bleed for your grace i unzip my flesh one slice away, my last time no more suffering oppinions please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justme1607307251 Posted July 24, 2005 Share Posted July 24, 2005 WOW thats DEEP and good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 24, 2005 Author Share Posted July 24, 2005 thank you, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetallicAguy Posted July 24, 2005 Share Posted July 24, 2005 Why so negative man? Sounds like satanic....kinda koo koo. What's bothering you man, suicide? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QTpie87 Posted July 25, 2005 Share Posted July 25, 2005 I think it's really beautiful. always have and always will love your writing. I miss you btw, hope to talk to you soon . remember to always smile. Qtpie87 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 25, 2005 Author Share Posted July 25, 2005 the thing thats bothering me is basically that i get really depressed really easily. ive been through alot in my life and if i dont write i end up yelling at myself in the mirror and stuff and thats not good, thanx for the replys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thisisnotanexit Posted July 25, 2005 Share Posted July 25, 2005 nice work, you sound very talented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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