From_Now_On Posted July 21, 2005 Share Posted July 21, 2005 I took a walk this afternoon As the rain poured from a gray sky Barefoot I danced through the puddled pavement My younger sister splashing closely by We passed several young couples Boys mumbling alongside smiling girls with arms outstretched as they ran ahead "Can we go back inside now?" One shivering, scowling boy said My sister and I chuckled at him Then ran on til' our feet hit the grass We looked up into the sky And it rinsed away our past Then I went to do a cartwheel My sister egged me on But that's when we both remembered You can't do cartwheels (in public) With a skirt on Just my mind running over today's events. Or well, it's 12:43 AM now so I suppose it would be 'yesterday's' events. This isn't my usual style at all...but it made me smile just to remember it. Good grief I love the rain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melrich Posted July 21, 2005 Share Posted July 21, 2005 Very good. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James101 Posted July 21, 2005 Share Posted July 21, 2005 Haha, i like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GettingOverIt Posted August 9, 2005 Share Posted August 9, 2005 This is great! I love that it can be read as very funny, or it can be read as very sobering... There are a lot of deeper things that could be found in here, whether you meant there to be or not... ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goincrazy Posted August 10, 2005 Share Posted August 10, 2005 Wow I'm jealous. The end is very funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted August 12, 2005 Author Share Posted August 12, 2005 Thanks for all of your comments. And Gettingoverit, you have a talent for picking apart everything I write and getting to the heart*s* of it. ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GettingOverIt Posted August 12, 2005 Share Posted August 12, 2005 I dunno why that should be....??? ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted August 15, 2005 Author Share Posted August 15, 2005 I dunno why that should be....??? ;-) Hmmm...I just don't know.... ;-p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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