dpressedone89 Posted July 20, 2005 Share Posted July 20, 2005 what if i dont exist? what if life is an illusion? too much of hate too much confusion as i lay in wait as i burn in hell my window of escape is this my illusion crafted well the torment too strong and i cant reach the gate i created these illusions some i love and some i hate i sit and i burn i cannot accept truth i cannot accept my hell so i invent these torments of my youth without bad there can be no good all good is not real its good and bad together that allows one to feel and i dread the day i die once the final silence fell i wake from my dream welcome to hell oppinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caasiopia68 Posted July 20, 2005 Share Posted July 20, 2005 so your an athiost? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 20, 2005 Author Share Posted July 20, 2005 no, not really. i was just tinkering with the thought of what if i was already dead and my life was just a dream, i got confusing and tripped me out so i wrote a poem about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaRaHmArIe8588 Posted July 20, 2005 Share Posted July 20, 2005 that poem is very deep..it really makes you think about life and problems... good job 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted July 21, 2005 Share Posted July 21, 2005 no, not really. i was just tinkering with the thought of what if i was already dead and my life was just a dream, i got confusing and tripped me out so i wrote a poem about it Interesting thought...and nice poem. -FNO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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