dpressedone89 Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 i put my life in the hands of a ghost hanging on to sombody already gone i still cant believe it but she's not coming back trusting the dead to keep me alive dying to live with nothing inside her hollow eyes look through my window i feel her breath on my skin i cant help but feel this way i wish i could hold her again my wounds are superficial and they heal to soon my tears chase your shadow alive again under the moon. im fine on the outside but my heart will never heal love is a myth and nothing is real because i loved her but just like the rest she's gone away for good i look at her picture and i break into tears all of our dreams have died all i have left are my nightmares. -stitches i know its not a happy-sunshine poem but its how i feel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gunther Posted July 15, 2005 Share Posted July 15, 2005 very interesting, was there a death recently? It's a very good poem, very nice use of words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 15, 2005 Author Share Posted July 15, 2005 it wasnt recent, it was 2 years ago in july.thanks for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eveofthestorm Posted July 21, 2005 Share Posted July 21, 2005 It is hard to get over a loved one. You learn to live with it, but, sometimes the memories just are too much to bear. It will get a little bit easier as times goes by. Just think of the good times together, and thank her/him for those memories. E Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue Posted July 28, 2005 Share Posted July 28, 2005 love is a myth and nothing is real Touching, I particularly liked that line^. Deep and from the heart. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizzle Posted July 31, 2005 Share Posted July 31, 2005 wow! i really felt that! that was amazing! sorry about the circumstance's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkshadow Posted July 31, 2005 Share Posted July 31, 2005 She lives on in your tears my friend. I believe they will mend the river that will send her on a safe passage until she is ready to leave you peace. I would say good work, but that is blasphamous against her life to me. But Good honor to her soul. Regards, -Tony Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liquidsilk Posted August 4, 2005 Share Posted August 4, 2005 youve got a way with words, i like this poem... even though its so sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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