shorty20 Posted July 12, 2005 Share Posted July 12, 2005 I posted a part of this poem on here a while ago and said it was just a start.... well here's the finished poem.... let me know what u guys think Tears sting my eyes can't get rid of all these cries can't stand all these lies I look in the mirror And what do I see? Fragments and Pieces Of what used to be me These feelings of hate I can not ignore I don't even know Who I am anymore He's turned me into This distorted reflection I need to turn back Go the other direction But his grip is too tight His hold is to strong I'm locked in a place Where I don't belong I need to turn back I need to remind myself Of the girl I left behind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I_love_rain_hugs_and_you Posted July 13, 2005 Share Posted July 13, 2005 Your poem is really interesting. I think though that it is impossible to go back and be who you used to be. Once you have lost your innocence, it is almost impossible to go back and some how get it back. You will ALWAYs be different. Instead, you could dream up how your future will be. Think about the future, and not the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted July 13, 2005 Author Share Posted July 13, 2005 I think you got a different meaning from my poem then I actually meant. When I wrote this, I was trying to get out of a relationship. A relationship that had totally drained me, and changed me as a person. I wasn't the light hearted, carefree, fun girl I was when I'd started dating him. He'd turned me into the basketcase of a girlfriend because he never let me do anything.. never let me go out... never let me talk to my friends.... I was a completely different person with him, and I mean that different in a bad way. I wrote this as I was battling with breaking up with him.... which I eventually did, and am now back to having fun and being myself.... with innocence...no I think you're right about that.... once it's gone you can really never go back to who you used to be.... it'd be almost impossible... anywayz, good insight and a different look at what my poem meant to you.... thanx for the comment.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mieshagirl Posted July 19, 2005 Share Posted July 19, 2005 good poem. I'm glad you got out of that relationship. Noone deserves to be unhappy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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