petalbud Posted July 11, 2005 Share Posted July 11, 2005 Take my decaying corpse Ignite my brittle bones Reveal me in my nothingness Scatter my ashen remains accross the sea the sea of life In which i drowned went under gave up Im happier this way a heap of nothing.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 11, 2005 Share Posted July 11, 2005 well writen, i like your word choice, the subject is kind of dark and troubling, but its nice that you can express it in a constructive way keep writing -sTiTcHeS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
petalbud Posted July 11, 2005 Author Share Posted July 11, 2005 thnx ddpresssedone89 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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