lunatic Posted July 2, 2005 Share Posted July 2, 2005 This is something I wrote tonight after I broke up with my GF. I am sad and this poem stinks but, it came out of me because I need to deal. So if this stinks I know already but, it came out and I need to let everyone know how I feel right now. Walking away I am sad today and this feeling just wont go away She walked out of my life this time forever and I was ready to make her my wife She took my heart and soul with her and left me here empty and broken without any cheer. I feel like a misfit toy that no one wants Someone that gets treated like a joke Instead of a great guy who never lies I seem to be cursed and that is no joke I have been picking them wrong I need to be strong I dont want you to go I want you to stay and love me so Since your not coming back I wish you well even though I feel like I fell I am in hell I cant cry and I dont know why This feels like a death sentence but atleast if it were there would be an end This is going to hurt for some time and I dont know if I am ready for it She left me here in this pain I wish things were different like in the beginning just like a book sometimes the ending in not what it seems She left me here to sulk and wither I am in so much pain that it would make you shiver She left me again and this time for good I just wish I understood Well I am going off to my heartache Please dont look when your walking away I dont want you to see me this way My life is a joke and I will recover I just hate being here like this being smothered by a pain that is too real and right now it seems like it wont heal I love you baby and I always will take care! Hubman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarterJonas Posted July 2, 2005 Share Posted July 2, 2005 Hi hubman, I'm sorry to hear of your recent breakup. If I remember correctly you came to this board because of a previous breakup. All I can really add is for you to hang in there. Good poem by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 2, 2005 Author Share Posted July 2, 2005 Thanks CarterJonas I appreciate the kind words. Yeah I have been on this forum for heart break for way too long. I will try to hang in there but right now I fell like I am in hell. I know I will get thur this but, I hate this feeling if you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarterJonas Posted July 2, 2005 Share Posted July 2, 2005 Nothing I can say will make you feel better at the moment. All I can really say is that you have got through it before and will do so again. Btw I didn't mean that you had been on the breakup forum for too long . Sometimes things fall into out laps, other times it doesn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted July 2, 2005 Author Share Posted July 2, 2005 I know bro I did not take your post like that. I was stating how I feel more than anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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