Emotional Posted July 1, 2005 Share Posted July 1, 2005 i write, but I don't know what for? look like I may lose the fight,now look who walked into the door everything is wrong its not making since to me my mind is in a haze and my voice is speechless with no words as you can see... to Release is to let go, but to hold on is to have hope hope can only take you so far but what to lose? When you dont have a car what if you just can't seem to move you feel like emotions need to soothe promises need to be proven but you know you should be movin but you sit and let life pass you you sit inside because you don't know what to do and even tho you have ideas and plans to make you next move you sit there like a rock , theres so many people that tell you to prove to prove to them that your worthy of respect, to not get steped on and to not be left, but you stay there stuck lost in your thoughts until you notice that dusk already turned into dawn once again and still thoughts run out and in and your head begins to spin and your feeled from head to toe with adrinalin and then instead of taking things into your own hands you must ask and plead with your father to let you stand and not sit on your butt and not do a thing eccept the oposit of what you preach and sing in your mind that preaching and singing gets the worst and plans are not met and your thoughts turn into thirst the rage soon turns into self hate the respect is non to give and less to take the thoughts begin to bleed because thats all you could really have control of hurt turns into pain and pain turn into happiness and control...and the bad turns into love releasing all of this makes you think...was it worth the scars and all the pain you begin to feel guilt and it gets you in the throat..the blood drips from your vein and the tears shed, but theres nobody there for you to be taken under their wing and nursed back to health when you start to hate yourself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted July 1, 2005 Share Posted July 1, 2005 Great job. It really expresses your feelings. The way the title and the last line correlate...that really struck me. Keep writing. -FNO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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