ang3l2004 Posted June 21, 2005 Share Posted June 21, 2005 I feel the gentle breeze of the wind blowing through my hair, Lying on the beach with you eye to eye to show I care. I look up at the sky and see the stars sparkling bright, You holding me close on the sand to sleep away the night. There is such a connection I feel inside once again, Could this ocean night be something like a sin. As I awake in your arms as the sun hits my face, thinking of the time we shared I do not want to leave this place. I know we will go our separate ways again like we always do, That the love that was shared just lastnight just was not true. It happens over and over again dreams always do end, But it will continue to be like this until my heart will fully mend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ladyluck Posted June 21, 2005 Share Posted June 21, 2005 it's beautiful you have such heart in your writting keep it up can't wait to read more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
passions1 Posted June 21, 2005 Share Posted June 21, 2005 It flows naturally & I love the words you have chosen to set up the feeling as if you're almost in the place as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sidehop Posted June 21, 2005 Share Posted June 21, 2005 Very beautiful...I admire anyone that can write such poems...I suck at it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted June 21, 2005 Author Share Posted June 21, 2005 Aww thankyou so much I have alot of poems on here I use to post all the time,But I love poems and writing them so I thought I would share thanks for the compliments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterious Gurl Posted June 21, 2005 Share Posted June 21, 2005 That poem was lovely! I thought it was I read it twice. That was awsome! Miya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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