shorty20 Posted June 13, 2005 Share Posted June 13, 2005 this poem is still a working progress... not to satisfied but thought I'd see what you guys think... I look into the mirror and what do I see? Fragments and pieces of what used to be me. As I look in the mirror, I wish and I pray That this foreign reflection will go away. I'm not the girl that I used to be And If you ask anyone I know they'll agree. Something horrible has changed me inside, And there's nothing I can do but hide From the mirror that reveals me true inside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sadness_Creeping Posted June 18, 2005 Share Posted June 18, 2005 I like it so far Defianly something I can relate too. You seem to be upset about something, but fail to mention what/who....maybe work that into it somehow? I find the best poems come from what really bothering you, or whats on your mind the most. Take your time, and I'm sure you'll be satisfied in the end. -SC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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