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Hey guys, here are two poems I wrote recently... i think it's pretty obvious what they're about... let me know what u think!

 

You messed with my head

You done me wrong

But now I'm back

And I'm feeling strong

No more talking

No more lies

No more hugs

No more puppy eyes

You need to accept

The damage you've done

You need to admit

This battle I've won

You think you're a player

Cheating and scandalous

But this time it's different

It'll take more than a kiss

To win me back

And make me yours

So as for now

I'm shutting the door

 

 

You were there for me

When my whole world fell apart

You helped me pick up the pieces

You helped me get a new start

I come to you

With all of my fears

I run to you

When I'm broke down in tears

You helped me up

When I started to fall

You carried me

When all I could do was crawl

You are my rock and my shelter

You support my every breath

Without you beside me

I would've given into death

And my only wish and hope

Is that one day you will see

How much your friendship means

And how much you've done for me

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Those are good shorty, just curious tho...do you write often? I'm wondering if you're like me or not...I can't really write on demand...I just write when I get some sort of emotional HI or LO, I wrote a small thing like last sunday when I hadn't written anything in a long time.

 

I was on campus going to final exam reviews and I somehow randomly ran accross the girl I last dated(but it never got serious), but I came accross her w/ her new guy holding hands...but they didn't see me. I went to a math review, but I couldn't really concentrate, I was just writing...

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yea, droptozero, most of the time, I need something to trigger my emotions to help me write. When I first start a relationship with someone I write ALOT about what I'm feeling, when a relationship is winding down and I'm getting ready to leave... not just with boyfriends, but with family, friends, etc... i usually need to be either really happy or really sad... very rarley do the words just randomly come to me... but thanx for the compliment.

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