shorty20 Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 Hey guys, here are two poems I wrote recently... i think it's pretty obvious what they're about... let me know what u think! You messed with my head You done me wrong But now I'm back And I'm feeling strong No more talking No more lies No more hugs No more puppy eyes You need to accept The damage you've done You need to admit This battle I've won You think you're a player Cheating and scandalous But this time it's different It'll take more than a kiss To win me back And make me yours So as for now I'm shutting the door You were there for me When my whole world fell apart You helped me pick up the pieces You helped me get a new start I come to you With all of my fears I run to you When I'm broke down in tears You helped me up When I started to fall You carried me When all I could do was crawl You are my rock and my shelter You support my every breath Without you beside me I would've given into death And my only wish and hope Is that one day you will see How much your friendship means And how much you've done for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropToZero Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 Those are good shorty, just curious tho...do you write often? I'm wondering if you're like me or not...I can't really write on demand...I just write when I get some sort of emotional HI or LO, I wrote a small thing like last sunday when I hadn't written anything in a long time. I was on campus going to final exam reviews and I somehow randomly ran accross the girl I last dated(but it never got serious), but I came accross her w/ her new guy holding hands...but they didn't see me. I went to a math review, but I couldn't really concentrate, I was just writing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted June 12, 2005 Author Share Posted June 12, 2005 yea, droptozero, most of the time, I need something to trigger my emotions to help me write. When I first start a relationship with someone I write ALOT about what I'm feeling, when a relationship is winding down and I'm getting ready to leave... not just with boyfriends, but with family, friends, etc... i usually need to be either really happy or really sad... very rarley do the words just randomly come to me... but thanx for the compliment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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