From_Now_On Posted March 27 Share Posted March 27 I am a misplaced comma A pause, When there shouldn't be A breath (,) taken When your meant to carry on Or stop entirely Reset! Period. Full stop. But I keep going Hanging on the ankles of The last letter As it tries awkwardly To shake me off To whisper "Not yet" Or "Not here, This spot is for someone else" But I'm not ready to finish my thought Or maybe I just need An extra, Break In the wrong place Where I'm not supposed to be If life is a sentence, I am, haphazard Punctuation,,, ,O,v,e,r,used ,Under,used & In, all, the, wrong, places, *First Draft. Freewrite poem. 5:11am. Wednesday, March 27th, 2024. (((Sorry, for the post spamming. I guess I have a lot of words pouring out of me today. Also -- it's been mentioned there may be a better place to post this type of content. Once I locate that, i promise to relocate there. 😉 In the meantime, thank you for suffering my ignorance and brain dumping. ♡))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted April 11 Share Posted April 11 Thank you that, made me smile. Oh wait I, think, I might be misplacing a few commas myself. 😁 I can get annoyed with people's misuse of punctuation, so probably good for me to laugh about it. Clever idea and hope to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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