nothingontheinside Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 First poem posted here in a long time. It's how i feel right now COMMENTS WANTED... yeah... hope everyones having a good start of the summer season. its called: it ends in bliss I lie here Bound and gagged. Only crying, Not even screaming As her hands reach towards The top of my ribcage. I can feel her fingernails digging under my skin As the first droplets of blood are freed. She cuts me. Again and again her nails penetrate my skin Until finally she gets hold of a flap of skin. She pulls. She hauls my skin Until the it pulls back. She can reach the bones And those can be heard crunching As she tries her hardest to get past them. She reaches inside of my chest And searches for my heart. And she rips it out. She is surprised that it comes out so easy and that its beats are calm and steady. It's the opposite of what she expected. She then sees the scars Showing her my past. It's been ripped out before And her anger rises to know She's not the first one to hurt me. She cringes in fury As she digs in with her nails and teeth And she rips apart. My heart. The very last thing keeping me alive. Now my insides lie here next to me I've been torn open And they've been torn apart And finally I am alone. -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melrich Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 Yeah it's not an easy read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vacuum Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 i love it,,,truly do.... " until the it pulls back".....is brillliant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pizzachick13 Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 truly, all i can say is wow... you're right it isn't an easy read but it's worth it when you get to the end... i loved it. well done Sappho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted May 27, 2005 Author Share Posted May 27, 2005 dunno if any of those were positive or negative... anyway... peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattj Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 great, but possibly at risk of putting Salvador Dali's thoughts into poetry no but anyway i think its very expressive, it is probably best viewed as some modern art should be viewed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Empty789 Posted June 5, 2005 Share Posted June 5, 2005 totally can relate amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoldMeTightly Posted September 16, 2005 Share Posted September 16, 2005 wow. i dont know how i stumbled accross this but i really really really like it. i dont even know if you're still on this website since this was posted so long ago. good work. never stop writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts