shorty20 Posted May 20, 2005 Share Posted May 20, 2005 Ok, well i was reading over the poems i've posted at this sight, and realized that every poem I've posted is negative. I want you guys to know that i write happy stuff too, so here's one I wrote while with my last boyfriend. If I could stop time When I'm wrapped in your arms Then I could stay happy Knowing that no harm Could ever come to me And take me away Just as long As in your arms I stay If I could stop time When you give me a kiss Then nothing in the World Could ever ruin this If I could stop time When I see your great smile If only I could stop time Just for a while Then I could savor Every moment with you I could savor All the cute things you do Then I could stay happy For my whole life long Because here on Earth I've found where I belong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattysky Posted May 23, 2005 Share Posted May 23, 2005 Hi Shorty, Your poem is awesome and you are just adorable. You should make them into songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted May 23, 2005 Author Share Posted May 23, 2005 the only problem with that is I'm not any good at putting it into songs. I don't play guitar or piano or anything so I couldn't put them to music even if I wanted to. Thanx alot! I'm glad you liked it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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