sam_i-am Posted May 17, 2005 Share Posted May 17, 2005 feelings are something that you have you want to hold on to what you got . You think you are so prefect but you aint. You want to share everything with that specail person the one that you have so much feelings for. But then you began to feel that your heart is beating very fast because you are in love with this specail person. You cant breathe or sleep because all you think about is that specail person. So this is how i feel for that specail person. And this person knows how i feel and who it is . hope yall like the poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted May 17, 2005 Share Posted May 17, 2005 As a 14 year old, I should know. Immaturity is written all over this. Dont be offended. Im just being honest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caesium Posted May 17, 2005 Share Posted May 17, 2005 Seems a little rushed, but that's ok, learn from ur mistakes eh? keep trying,keep up the work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sam_i-am Posted May 18, 2005 Author Share Posted May 18, 2005 it is good to know all this but i do have 3 poems published in a poetry book and besides i just did this because i was in a mood that i didnt wont to be in so see i can write poetry when i want to but thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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