shorty20 Posted May 17, 2005 Share Posted May 17, 2005 I really tried to do what was right Like make amends when we'd had a fight I tried my best to make him smile But inside he'd been frowning all the while. I wish I had back what we had at first That special love that makes your heart burst With overwhelming feelings of love The kind that's only sent from above But now we know it isn't true We wern't meant to be and now we're through All I have left are the thoughts in my mind I think about them daily as I watch my life unwind He is the one who stole my heart But he handed it back broken and said we must part Now he's trying to be a friend He made the wounds he's trying to mend But it only feels like salt in a cut Because now my broken heart's shut It's locked up tight and lost it's key And no one could open it, whoever it may be. Maybe in time it will open once more But then I'll know a part will always be sore The part he took will never come back It's up in his heart pinned up with a tack And even though guys come and go I believe I will always love him so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caesium Posted May 17, 2005 Share Posted May 17, 2005 That was good. I read about three of yours now, and they've all be awesome, i really enjoyed them, ur a very talented person. Wish u all the best. keep them coming too, Look forward to reading them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty20 Posted May 17, 2005 Author Share Posted May 17, 2005 thanx alot! thats why I put them up here... in hopes that maybe I can reach someone who feels the same way I feel and can relate to my poems.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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