Salt in a Cut

[shorty20]

I really tried to do what was right

Like make amends when we'd had a fight

 

I tried my best to make him smile

But inside he'd been frowning all the while.

 

I wish I had back what we had at first

That special love that makes your heart burst

 

With overwhelming feelings of love

The kind that's only sent from above

 

But now we know it isn't true

We wern't meant to be and now we're through

 

All I have left are the thoughts in my mind

I think about them daily as I watch my life unwind

 

He is the one who stole my heart

But he handed it back broken and said we must part

 

Now he's trying to be a friend

He made the wounds he's trying to mend

 

But it only feels like salt in a cut

Because now my broken heart's shut

 

It's locked up tight and lost it's key

And no one could open it, whoever it may be.

 

Maybe in time it will open once more

But then I'll know a part will always be sore

 

The part he took will never come back

It's up in his heart pinned up with a tack

 

And even though guys come and go

I believe I will always love him so

[Caesium]

That was good. I read about three of yours now, and they've all be awesome, i really enjoyed them, ur a very talented person. Wish u all the best. keep them coming too, Look forward to reading them.

[shorty20]

thanx alot! thats why I put them up here... in hopes that maybe I can reach someone who feels the same way I feel and can relate to my poems..